Front cover and Contents page Feedback

As we have now started to get well underway with our contents pages, we were now put through a class review where our peers could comment on our work. They gave us comments on our  pictures, background, and placing many things are also reviewed as this would help improve our work in the future.
The feedback was written to us which gave their comments :

The Front page

For my front page I wanted to give a clear and bright scene which showed both a young and youthful but famine side to hip hop.
The body position of the model was to grab attention and to play into the reader belief to buy it. I also thought that it was quirky I would be unique.


Comments were:
student 1 - 'great pictures' 'some writing is unclear' 'maybe use a varitey of pictures(people)' 'looks professional'

student 2 - 'good title' 'make words in the sicker bigger' 'use different fonts' 'good picture'

student 3 - 'nice house style throughout' 'make stories underneath remix' 'make circle more lifelike' '










My Contents page

For my contents page I wanted to be different and have a one picture page as well as a normal, conventional page of contents. this would fit with the ethos of a hip hop magazine as well as putting a fresher layout in my magazine.
The body position was to look different as the I wanted her from a different angle as well as her looking directly into the camera.

Comments were:
student 1 - 'black and white picture works' 'be careful as some colours do not work'

student 2 - 'need other pictures' 'not sure about background' 'good title' 'nice layout'

student 3 - 'more variety in contents' 'have sections for stories in contents' 'perhaps more colour' 'front and contents go well together'

overall i was pleased with the results as well as having something to work on.